I am loving the way this looks on the page, with the long reeling down of it, and especially the repetition of the ‘so’ accentuating the feeling. It has such an inevitable gravity to it, I’m liking that.
“inevitable gravity”… seems to interfere when aligning the elements of a lasting intimacy… which can go by so many different names….thanks for connecting the dots
…the connection of longing to yielding brings about the architecture of belonging…
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It might built a peace filled world… including everything….
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I am loving the way this looks on the page, with the long reeling down of it, and especially the repetition of the ‘so’ accentuating the feeling. It has such an inevitable gravity to it, I’m liking that.
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“inevitable gravity”… seems to interfere when aligning the elements of a lasting intimacy… which can go by so many different names….thanks for connecting the dots
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weight
~
some scents
will
always
~
sink
depths
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gravity is usually deeper than
the ephemeral moment of heat
weight
wait
love
sometimes
a compromise
to see which way
life moves on
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patience
~
t
i
m
e
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sometimes elasticity
other
t
i
m
e
s
just a rubber band
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i did not read this poem, i submitted to it. beautifully written, deeply moving. tony
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I feel this one will always be unfinished, Tony….an infinite number of endings….and beginnings. Love to you and yours
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