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  1. I am loving the way this looks on the page, with the long reeling down of it, and especially the repetition of the ‘so’ accentuating the feeling. It has such an inevitable gravity to it, I’m liking that.

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    • “inevitable gravity”… seems to interfere when aligning the elements of a lasting intimacy… which can go by so many different names….thanks for connecting the dots

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